AFTERLIFE

Very good presentation of what you wrote. It was already good on its own, but this gives it a very specific tone that mightn't've been there before depending on how it was read. Feels like it helps your intentions come through even more. Nice sound design. I liked the steps in the background as it was all about those halls by the end of it. Nicely done, thanks for this. :)

Stirring and impactful!

Oooo nicely done. Great use of videotome's tools to augment an eerie effective poem.

Haunting! Wonderful cryptic little "story," quick to read but also lingers in the echoes of your mind when finished. I love the ambient music that accompanies the text, and sfx sound like machines of the past... truly spooky!!!!